“The purpose of art is washing the dust of daily life off our souls.”
― Pablo Picasso
This absent determination
Watches over time that simply refuses to halt
In the face of a starved, diminishing soul.
Such creative impoverishment is this
Where words flee and stick figures reign
Breeding an utter lack of books –
The kind with sweet, homely pages.
Caught in this prophetic rattrap*,
With all its glorified noise and chases,
Where must one go to simply live?
Pray, show us the way to
Where paint blinds our sight,
Music paves the way
And words let us speak – truly.
“Literature, Art, and Fashion possess the power to transform the very essence of what we consider to be reality.”
― Prometheus Worley
*Rattrap refers to The Rattrap by Selma Lagerloff (excerpt given below). I don’t entirely agree with it but it’s the kind of thought that makes sense when I’m in a particular state of mind i.e when everything feels too loud and busy.
He had naturally been thinking of his rattraps when suddenly he was struck by the idea that the whole world about him — the whole world with its lands and seas, its cities and villages — was nothing but a big rattrap. It had never existed for any other purpose than to set baits for people. It offered riches and joys, shelter and food, heat and clothing, exactly as the rattrap offered cheese and pork, and as soon as anyone let himself be tempted to touch the bait, it closed in on him, and then everything came to an end."

This was written in response to this week’s We’ave Written Weekly; W3 poetry prompt hosted by David @ The Skeptic’s Kaddish. This week’s prompt given by Murisopsis is to write a poem of 14 lines in any form or style on the topic of poverty (moral, financial, romantic, etc.). Please feel free to join in! Submissions are open until Monday, January 9, 10:00 AM (GMT+3).
Thoughtfully yours,
D


gorgeous and deep, Deepthy ❤
I really, really like this.
~David
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Im Spiegel
der Seele
kann ich
meinen Dreck
aus der
Vergangenheit
nicht reine waschen
der Seele
gibt es
keinen Unterschied
zwischen innen
und aussen
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Beautiful expression of words Deepthy
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Beautiful poem.
Also, I love that quote from Picasso.
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Wonderful musings and a completely delightful take on the prompt!!
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Loving this transportive take on the prompt! ❤
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“Where paint blinds our sight,
Music paves the way
And words let us speak – truly.” Gosh I LOVE those lines! This whole piece is so brilliantly thought out, one can feel the emotion you’re coming from. Just beautiful, dear friend. Absolutely love this one 🤍🤍🤍
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This was so good to read, D! What a brilliant piece you created here with your words. Very deep and gorgeous as always! Loved it! ✨
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Thanks sharing this wonderful expression of words . This makes me smile.
Let’s follow each other. Thanks Anita
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When I saw your comment, I was hoping you had written today, and what a captivating write this is! ✨👏🏻
These lines:
“Where words flee and stick figures reign
Breeding an utter lack of books –
The kind with sweet, homely pages.”
Be still my heart!
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Love your speaking words so beautiful Deepthy! ❣️
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Lovely writing! I don’t agree with the extract from Selma Lagerloff either, but I do see where she is coming from with The Rattrap.
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Having art around us, making art, that is indeed soul health and is intuitive for humans, essential. Thank you for your art here that warns of the grim prospects of artistic impoverishment.
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D, being born into a home without art, books, computers, and music puts a young child at a disadvantage when entering school. Programs like Head Start give disadvantaged children a chance to catch up with their peers. Your poem made me think about what it must be like to live in a home without the advantages others have.
I hope all is well with you. happy New Year! ❤
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Thanks so much! ❤️
I’m absolutely thrilled to hear that!
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Thank you so much, Shereen!❤️
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Aw thank you! It makes me so happy to hear that!🤗❤️
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I’m so pleased to hear that! Thanks so much 🙌💖
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Aw I’m so glad to hear that, Grace! This is one that’s close to my heart, so it’s incredibly humbling that you find it emotive! Thanks so much 🙌💖
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It’s my pleasure! So happy to hear it made you smile!
Absolutely! Your gravatar doesn’t seem to be working, could you please share a link?
Thank you so much for taking the time to visit, read and comment 🤗❤️
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Yay! So happy to hear that, Cindy! Hope you’ve been well! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment!🤗❤️
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Thanks so much! ❤️ Yes, glad you think so too – it’s like a conditional statement 😂
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I absolutely agree with that. Art just provides a different kind of atmosphere to grow in.
My pleasure! Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts ❤️
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Oh, absolutely. I can’t imagine how deprived the child must feel if they were brought up in such an environment. I’m humbled my poem made you think of that – it’s definitely something we need to do more to rectify.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your thoughts!
I’ve been doing okay! A tad busy with college but it’s all good! Hope you’re doing great!
Happy new year, Cheryl! I hope you have a fantastic 2023!🤗❤️
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you’re so welcome D.. it’s always a pleasure!!! It’s been awhile but yes, thanks❣️
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https://100countrytrek.com/
The bottom page press the Follow button on the right side. Thanks Anita
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I loved these very lines too!
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A very thoughtful poem! Graciously penned❤️
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Aw I’m so touched to hear that, haha!🤗❣️
Thanks so much! Those are my favourite lines too, absolutely glad to hear that!
🤗❤️
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Lovely, dear
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You are welcome. 🤗
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Wow this is deep 🤣😎🙃
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Wonderful poem created with such thoughtfulness. I love the interaction with quotes.
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Deepthy ❤
I just wanna share that this week's W3, hosted by the sweet, lovely Sarah David, is now live:
Enjoy!
~David
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Cool! Thanks so much for letting me know!❣️
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Aw thank you! So happy you liked that – I love using quotes that summarise the theme of the post!😁❣️
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Why, thank you!🙌😂
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Thanks so much, Ms Rae ❤️
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Thanks so much, Devangi! So kind of you to say that 🤗❤️
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🥹❤️
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Thanks so much, Anita!
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🤗
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Ahh this was so wonderful to read! i absolutely adored it!
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Loved this, D! 🥰
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Reblogged this on Literacy and Me.
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I’m so glad. 🙂
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❤️❤️
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Thanks so much! Me too – it’s such a poignant quote.
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Aw that’s really kind of you to say, Jan! Thanks so much – much appreciated!❤️
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Maggie!! It’s so good to see you back!🤗
Thank you – thrilled you liked it!❤️
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Aw thank you, Suhani! It makes me so happy to hear that!❤️
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I love the Picasso quote. It makes me not fear the advent of AI, no matter how advanced it becomes. Because art really does function as a way to wash our souls, and people who are looking for that will never look for something generated by a machine. Anyway, nice poetry!
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Stunning poetry Dee ❤
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I’m so happy to be back and talk to you again! 💕💕 You’re very welcome!
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🤗❤️
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Thank you so much, Henrietta ❤️
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I agree! It does hurt a bit to see AI generated art and poetry but I agree that art is fundamentally rooted in human emotion and soul. Can’t deny AI is being tremendously helpful for academic writing though 👀😂
Thanks so much, Stuart! Much appreciated!
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