The Pen’s Lament

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The Pen's Lament | Short Prose Random Specific Thoughts

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Words make you think. Music makes you feel. A song makes you feel a thought.
― Yip Harburg

With every word I pen down, I see how your innate melody distorts them to fall in line with the tune you were born with. In all its splendour and glory, I see your music seeping into the hearts of the grieved and happy. The music whose essence I create. As I write and scratch off words, I see you in the distance, giddy with the impatience of not being called sooner. I see you held prisoner at the threshold of the paper that shelters your would-be lyrics while I struggle to find that perfect word that sends pangs of warmth and sorrow flying to every listener, kind enough to lend you their ears.

My heart grieves with every syllable I give birth to, on this magical night, knowing they won’t be mine after you enslave them to your tantalizing beauty of rhythm. I can feel myself running out of ink while my metal nib continues to write and scratch words over and over. Oh, how I wish I could make them sing for me like you will.

Through parchment after parchment, you sit and watch as I grow wearier and wearier exhausting myself to hunt for that perfect word we both know doesn’t exist yet. Word after word, syllable after syllable, period after period; oh how we toil through the moonlit night! I’m at the last verse now and I hear your heart flutter with the joy of completion as I admire my handiwork.

“Won’t you help to sing these songs of freedom?”
― Bob Marley

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I find myself letting out a long, sad sigh of relief as I put that period at the end of the last word of the final verse. I survey my piece of work and watch as you soar into the words, breathing life into every nook and corner of every word. I take my place on the chipped wooden box reserved for me and listen as you’re sung, every word falling into a place of its own. I listen as the music drifts and drips down my soul, seeping into my heart and enslaving my mind forevermore.

My soul twirls to the rhythm of the song, you make the skies sing tonight.

Oh, dear song, how I wish I could write you all over again.

Perhaps it is how we are made; perhaps words of truth reach us best through the heart, and stories and songs are the language of the heart.
― Stephen R. Lawhead, Merlin

Thoughtfully yours,
Introverted Thoughts aka D

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63 Comments Add yours

  1. What an unique thought. 👏👏👏 Appreciate you for such a magnificent work. I am so impressed.
    I survey my piece of work and watch as you soar into the words, breathing life into every nook and corner of every word. A beautiful writing dear D. ❤️❤️❤️🤝

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  2. Diamond says:

    Ahh, why was this so sad…

    Anyway, gorgeous writing D! Also, you’re almost at 1,000 followers! WOW!

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  3. gabychops says:

    Dear D, what you and your pen created together is the poetry of beauty. You should write, NOW; you don’t need “a story”, you could just put down your thoughts, and it will still read beautifully.
    Thank you.
    Joanna

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  4. Crandew says:

    Incredible! So beautifully written, all of it. I’m afraid I’ll have to steal the use of “scratching words”, it’s so amazingly descriptive. Love it.

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  5. Ace says:

    “My heart grieves with every syllable I give birth to, on this magical night, knowing they won’t be mine after you enslave them to your tantalizing beauty of rhythm.”
    “I listen as the music drifts and drips down my soul, seeping into my heart and enslaving my mind forevermore.”
    Ok wow, I am just at a loss for words!! This entire piece is so magical and breathtakingly beautiful, these two lines and your final two lines stood out to me though! D, this is seriously amazing writing and really inspires me!! Incredibly well done, I look forward to the future of this series 💛🖤🤗

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  6. Cari says:

    Absolutely beautiful! I love this series, and look forward to future posts.

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  7. Insightful and beautiful ❤

    -David

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  8. asthaisha says:

    Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️😍

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  9. Writing can be a painstaking process. How we struggle to make the end result seem effortless! It’s a labor of love! Beautifully written, D! ❤ ❤ ❤ Have a great week!

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  10. Aw.. thank you so much! It makes me so happy to hear that! 🤗❤️

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  11. I was hoping to make it sad but also inevitable, some things you just have to let go when the time’s right. Thank you so much, Diamond!! 💕
    Oh my goodness.

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  12. Thank you so much, Joanna! It’s more about a purpose than a story, I think about rather unnecessary things a lot of the time😂
    My pleasure! Thank you so much for your kind support! 💕

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  13. Thank you so much!! Haha, please feel free to! I’m so glad you liked it!

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  14. Thank you so much, Cari! 💕

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  15. Thank you! ❤️

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  16. Thank you so much! ❤️

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  17. Aw.. thank you so so much, Ace!! You’re thoughts and feedback mean so much to me and I’m so happy you liked and felt inspired by this one! You just made my day! Thank you so much!!🤗💕

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  18. Absolutely! But it’s still mentally rewarding at the end. I agree! That’s a beautiful phrase, ‘labour of love’. Thank you so much! You too! ❤️❤️

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  19. nushhe says:

    This is Soo gud!! I found it a little sad but it was beautifully written ❤️❤️💕💕

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  20. You’re very good at writing! This is a bit sad but beautiful ❤️

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  21. Thank you so much, Anushka!❤️ It was a pen’s ‘lament’ 🤷😂

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  22. Aw.. thank you so much, Ariela!! I did want it to be sad, it’s about letting go ❤️

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  23. Ace says:

    Aww I’m glad to hear it!!! And you’re so welcome, I mean every word 🖤

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  24. hgamma says:

    The essence of women
    as the bearer and sustainer of life
    The words of the poets
    The sounds of the musicians
    The painter’s colors
    The thinking of the wise
    The knowledge of those who know
    The feeling and the premonitions of the people

    The soul is the source of all being of all thinking
    The music in the echo of your orchestra
    A song on the lips confirms their magic

    All arts in the service of the soul

    The words in search of truth
    they resound in each of us
    over time
    im a little different here and now

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  25. Lana Teramae says:

    You’ve combined writing and music into one, I love it!

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  26. Insider says:

    I have my English exam tomorrow and I cant help but wonder what would happen to me, if I got this for comprehension. I’ll probably keep rereading it over and over until every word is etched into my heart, just so that every word I write hence would contain more than what’s shown on surface even if it takes time. Wow D! That was one incredible post from start to finish ❤

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  27. AP2 says:

    Exquisitely written post D! 🙏

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  28. peanutbuttersandwiches_ says:

    ASGHDJFGHSKSKADJSK AMAZING

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  29. vaniheart says:

    Very beautifully written ❤❤👏👏

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  30. maggie says:

    Ok wow. This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL, D! The imagery and message it conveyed… goodness. I loved it. 😍❤️
    Btw that featured image is one of my all-time favorites! I’m serious!

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  31. Michele Lee says:

    I love the partnership created in this piece – the relationship between
    the writer and the singer/song and the many interpretations of this.
    An intriguing and creative soul dance. 💖

    and this…
    “…to hunt for that perfect word we both know doesn’t exist yet.”
    Exquisite!

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  32. Kaelyn says:

    Awww how is this so beautiful and poetic?! D, I can’t!! YOUR SO TALENTED AT WRITING!! This was so so beautiful, it was like the words were dancing across the page!!
    *hugs
    -kaelyn 😛

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  33. So happy to hear that!! Thank you so much!

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  34. Thank you so much!

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  35. Thank you so much!!❤️

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  36. Rae Longest says:

    I spent some time listening to music this morning early–first some trumpet and jazz followed bey classical. What a wonderful way to start the day.
    You have given us insight into the creative process in this piece, Hon. Congrats!

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  37. Lana Teramae says:

    No problem! Have a lovely rest of your day!

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  38. HensBlooms says:

    I enjoyed reading your post, it brought a big smile to my face as I was reminded of the lyrics sung by Bob Marley “One Love” and started singing

    One love, one heart
    Let’s join together and a-feel all right
    One love (full of mercy)
    One heart (I tell you)
    Let’s join together (at this house I pray)
    And a-feel alright (and I will feel alright)
    Let’s join together and a-feel all right

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  39. Thank you so much ❤️

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  40. Ahh, thank you so much, Maggie!! I’m so happy to hear that!❤️
    Yay! I went a bit crazy in Canva😂

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  41. Aw.. that’s incredibly kind of you to say!! I think your interpretation and answers would end up a piece of art in themselves!
    Thank you so very much for taking the time to read! I hope your exam went well! ❤️❤️

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  42. Aw.. I’m so happy to hear that! I intended one between a pen and the song it was made to write!
    Thank you so much! ❤️❤️

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  43. Ahh… thank you so much, Kaelyn!!❤️ It’s just a hobby 😂 I’m so glad you liked it!!

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  44. That’s lovely! Music does set the mood for a good day!
    I’m so pleased you think so! Thank you so much for your constant support!!💕

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  45. That means so much to me! I’m so happy you liked it!

    Wow, those are such beautiful lyrics! I can’t wait to check that song out!
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your thoughts!! ❤️

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  46. Insider says:

    You flatter me D ❤ Thank you so much, but I highly doubt it would be anywhere as close as yours ( :
    The pleasure is mine! I am just really glad its over! (:

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  47. Kaelyn says:

    Aww, ofc sista!! And awww, but you do such a good job at it. Yeah! 😀
    *hugs
    -kaelyn 😛

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  48. maggie says:

    You’re very welcome!
    Well it was worth all the time you spent on it! 😂❤️

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  49. Michele Lee says:

    I love the dance you created with your singing pen. 🥰

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  50. This was an amazing post, D! The verses were poetic and flow-y (?) which I loved! ♥

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  51. My pleasure! I think you’re a wonderful writer!
    Yay! Glad to hear that!

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  52. Insider says:

    Trust me it is mutual ❤

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  53. tndos says:

    Beautifully written great work

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  54. stargazer says:

    Beautiful words! There really is something magical about writing (well, your writing anyway… 😉)

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  55. Thanks so much, Moi! Aw..haha, so glad to hear that!! ❤️

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  56. Aw.. thank you so much! There definitely is something magical about getting to give strings of thoughts a concrete form!😉✨

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  57. Jehosheba says:

    Oh my goodness, this was so beautiful. I love all the different emotions you included here. Thank you so much for sharing.

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  58. Ahh, thank you so so much, Jehosheba. I absolutely loved trying to capture the vulnerability here and it means so much to me that you liked it! My pleasure! Thank you so much for reading! ❤️

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  59. tkbrown says:

    You have a beautiful style to your writing. I thoroughly enjoy reading! Thank You for sharing!

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